When I visited New York CityJ
The day after I had
arrived at the hotel I decided to take a daytrip to New York City , considering
all the people I know who have been there and said It was an awesome
experience. I took the bus into town from my hotel and ended up In the middle
of Times Square. It was a complete mess and there was soo many people there. I
dropped breakfast at the hotel , so I ended up eating at McDonalds, a very
unhealthy breakfast but It was good.
After i finished eating my breakfast, I decided to
head to the first thing I was most hyped to see. The Statue Of Liberty which I
had seen on soo many pictures and I wanted to stand In front of It and watch It.
Seeing It In a picture Is one thing , but to stand right In front of It and
look up on the big statue , Is a completely different feeling I can promise
you!
After a lot of pictures with the camera I decided to
og ahead. There were so many more things I wanted to see, but I realized that It
not was possible In terms of when the bus came to take me back , and the distance
between the stuff I was going to visit. But anyway so I went to take a look at
the Unisphere , which I also heard a lot of good stuff about from friends and
family.
The Unisphere was awesome , even though It was
packed with people In the park and around the Unisphere. The park was huge and
It was very nice to watch . It was rich on flowers and around the Unisphere was
It big jets that went around. It was very nice to look at .
But when I was finished visiting the Unisphere I got
a shock, the time had gone so fast at that time i had been there. And I knew
that It was ten minutes to my bus went so I had to hurry. I had visited two
places and It was an experience of a lifetime. I got a lot of nice pictures
which I will take home and show , and I was just super happy that day!
When
I visited Rochester ! J
The day after I had
been in NYC I decided to take one last trip, and it went to Rochester. That day
I ate breakfast at the hotel. I had noticed a little out in the evening
yesterday because of stomach ailments. I AM NEVER GONNA EAT BREAKFAST ON MCDONALDS
AGAIN! A BAD OPTION.! When I was finished with my breakfast, I took the first
bus which arrived and went into the city.
When I got off the bus I
noticed that it not was that hectic as it was the day before. Rochester was a
much more relaxing city and I felt that I needed that. A day with some silence
and just walk around in the city, take a look and maybe buy something exciting.
What i noticed was that
there were many students here, for those who wanted higher education. I had
read that they have very good and nice universities; University of Rochester and Rochester
Institute of Technology. I noticed that there are many students who were in
school that day when I went into the city with the bus. I was going to take the
earliest bus and when the bus arrived I took a step in. The bus was full of
students.
When I had taken a look
around in Rochester , I felt that it was time for some lunch before I was going
to take the bus back to the hotel. I ate at a sandwich bar that had absolutely
delicious food. When I think about it that was one of the best meal I have ever
eaten. These guys were experts.
When I was done with my
king meal I took a bus back to the hotel and then just relaxed for the rest of
the day. I am very happy with this holiday and hope that every day becomes a
good day! J

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